what do you think makes korean cuisine special and different from other foriegn cuisine?

2018-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think kimchi makes korean cuisine special because the kimchi is harmonious with all the korean cisine. That the reason we always eat kimchi with all meals. Side dishes also make korean cuisine special. in every meals, we commonly place some kinds of side dishes.(kimchi is always included) I was told that the China do not place side dished. they eat one main dish and Japan also eat side dishes but they have fewer numbers than us in my opinion. And when we eat the soup like a kimcgijjigae, most of korea family use one pot. maybe this culture is created by annoyance for reduce the dishes to be washed. but i think this culture can create the bond between the family members. but some people think that is not good for hygiene and use each dish for the soup. i think this culture is diffrent from other foriegn cuisine.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you so much for this one. Good point. I think these things you mentioned make Korean cuisine different. Korean food is really good. I think more and more foreigners are developing interest in Korean cuisine.

- T. Beth   

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I think kimchi makes korean cuisine special because the kimchi is harmonious with all the korean cisine.

>>> I think kimchi makes korean cuisine special because the kimchi is harmonious with all the Korean dishes.   

>>> OR: I think kimchi makes korean cuisine special because kimchi goes well with almost all of Korean dishes.   

That the reason we always eat kimchi with all meals.
 >>> That\'s the reason we always eat kimchi with all meals.

>>> OR: That\'s the reason we always eat kimchi in every meal.

Side dishes also make korean cuisine special.

>>> CORRECT.  

in every meals, we commonly place some kinds of side dishes.(kimchi is always included)

>>> In every meal, we usually place some kind of side dishes (kimchi is always included).  

I was told that the China do not place side dished.

>>> I was told that Chinese do not place side dishes.  

they eat one main dish and Japan also eat side dishes but they have fewer numbers than us in my opinion.
>>> CORRECT. (They eat one main dish and Japan also eat side dishes but they have fewer numbers than us in my opinion.)    
And when we eat the soup like a kimcgijjigae, most of korea family use one pot.

>>> In addition, when we eat soup like kimchijjigae, most Korean families serve it in one pot.   

maybe this culture is created by annoyance for reduce the dishes to be washed.

>>> Maybe this culture is created due to annoyance of having to wash a lot of dishes.  

but i think this culture can create the bond between the family members.
 >>> CORRECT. (But I think this culture can create the bond between the family members.)   

but some people think that is not good for hygiene and use each dish for the soup. 

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: However, some people think that it is not good for hygiene and use separate dishes for the soup.  

i think this culture is diffrent from other foriegn cuisine.

>>> CORRECT. (  I think this culture is diffrent from other foriegn cuisine.)

>>> OR: I think this culture makes Korean cuisine different from others.



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