What do you think makes Korean pop music different form other country\'s music?
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What do you think makes Korean pop music different form other country\'s music?
The K-pop is unique music a Korea. When 2012, K-pop is well known to foreigner. And that Korea male singer ‘PSY’s Kang-Nam style was introduced the Korea music to the whole world.
That song is unique and chorus part is very addictive. So, that melody was attracted for wide world people. Likewise, K-pop music has very addictive melody, so this is very important factor for famous to global. And now, so many famous K-pop star appeared on the worldwide stage. BTS, black pink etc. They have attractive performance, and excellence singing, these things come together makes good stages. Thus, these factors could make everyone like K-pop.
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Thanks for this [이름] [이름]! K-pop music is indeed addictive.
The K-pop is unique music a Korea.
>>> The K-pop is unique music to Korea.
When 2012, K-pop is well known to foreigner.
>>> In 2012, K-pop was well known to foreigners.
And that Korea male singer ‘PSY’s Kang-Nam style was introduced the Korea music to the whole world.
>>> And that Korea male singer ‘PSY’s Kang-Nam style introduced Korean music to the whole world.
That song is unique and chorus part is very addictive.
>>> correct
So, that melody was attracted for wide world people.
>>> So, that melody attracted people wide world.
Likewise, K-pop music has very addictive melody, so this is very important factor for famous to global.
>>> Likewise, K-pop music has very addictive melody, so this is a very important factor for its global fame.
And now, so many famous K-pop star appeared on the worldwide stage. BTS, black pink etc.
>>> And now, so many famous K-pop star appeared on the worldwide stage such as BTS, black pink etc.
They have attractive performance, and excellence singing, these things come together makes good stages.
>>> They have attractive performances and excellent singing, these things come together to make a good stage.
Thus, these factors could make everyone like K-pop.
>>> correct
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