What do you think makes people choose one profession over another?

2014-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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People basically opt for their jobs based on their experience or what they’ve studied at school if you just finished your degree. Remembering how I had entered into this industry that I have been working in, I applied for several big conglomerates when I graduated from the college. One of the companies that I applied and passed the company entrance exam was the automobile company, so I got hired. In Korea, big companies have the regular recruiting season to hire new employees from university graduates. They do not normally specify a particular job for each job seeker, but they hire as many as more than a thousand new college graduates at a time and assign them to jobs based on their major at universities. So, typically in Korea, you may land in the job regardless of your own choice. But as you work for the company, you might be given a chance to change your job, although it is sometime hard for you to choose a right job you like to work for. These days, you don't have many choices.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Sir [이름]!

We only have three days left before Christmas Day!!!

I want to thank you for giving me a great present throughout this year, it is you being my student.

No kidding. I appreciate it a lot.

Anyway, the good thing in Korea is that you will have a chance to change your career.

Because here in the Philippines, there are people who stay in the company just to survive.

They are not happy but they need to survive for their family.

This topic is really interesting, maybe we can talk about this in class.

Have a wonderful day.

Teacher Nina


People basically opt for their jobs based on their experience or what they’ve studied at school if you just finished your degree.

>> CORRECT

Remembering how I had entered into this industry that I have been working in, I applied for several big conglomerates when I graduated from the college.

>> Remembering how I had entered into this industry that I have been working in, I applied for several big conglomerates when I graduated from college.

One of the companies that I applied and passed the company entrance exam was the automobile company, so I got hired.

>> CORRECT

In Korea, big companies have the regular recruiting season to hire new employees from university graduates.

>> In Korea, big companies have a regular recruiting season to hire new employees who are fresh graduates from the university.

They do not normally specify a particular job for each job seeker, but they hire as many as more than a thousand new college graduates at a time and assign them to jobs based on their major at universities.

>> CORRECT

So, typically in Korea, you may land in the job regardless of your own choice.

>> CORRECT

But as you work for the company, you might be given a chance to change your job, although it is sometime hard for you to choose a right job you like to work for.

>> CORRECT

These days, you don\'t have many choices.

>> CORRECT

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