What do you think makes the weekend exciting for most people?
학생이 쓴 원문
The weekend is full of free time that you can spend as the way you want. That\'s the unresistable fact that everybody is excited about their weekends, even though how to spend the time can be different. For people who were very busy with overwhelming jobs during the weekdays, they would be very excited just to have a free time to relax, doing nothing. On the other hand, people who are very active and loves outdoor activities, will be thrilled to go outside of office and home on the weekends. In some cases, people can meet families and friends and maybe take care of their pets during the weekends. To sum up, most people loves weekends because they can do whatever they wanted which was not possible during the weekdays due to the obligations and circumstances of their jobs. Lastly, there\'s one more secret about the magic of the weekend. If people have so much free time in a whole week, they won\'t appreciate the weekend as much as they do right now. Something rare feels more precious!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. People definitely have different reasons for looking forward the weekend. In my case, I enjoy being a homebody these days.
- T. Beth
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>> OR: The weekend is full of free time that you can spend the way you want to.
That\'s the unresistable fact that everybody is excited about their weekends, even though how to spend the time can be different.
>>> That\'s the resistible fact why everybody is excited about their weekends, even though how to spend the time can be different.
For people who were very busy with overwhelming jobs during the weekdays, they would be very excited just to have a free time to relax, doing nothing.
>>> correct.
On the other hand, people who are very active and loves outdoor activities, will be thrilled to go outside of office and home on the weekends.
>>> OR: On the other hand, people who are very active and love outdoor activities will be thrilled to go outside of their office and home on the weekends.
In some cases, people can meet families and friends and maybe take care of their pets during the weekends.
>>> correct.
To sum up, most people loves weekends because they can do whatever they wanted which was not possible during the weekdays due to the obligations and circumstances of their jobs.
>>> To sum it up, most people love weekends because they can do whatever they wanted which was not possible during the weekdays due to the obligations and circumstances of their jobs.
Lastly, there\'s one more secret about the magic of the weekend.
>>> correct.
>>> OR: Lastly, there\'s one more interesting about the wonders of the weekend.
If people have so much free time in a whole week, they won\'t appreciate the weekend as much as they do right now.
>>> correct
Something rare feels more precious!
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