What do you think most people are worried about these days and what advice would you give them?
학생이 쓴 원문
Worries that people have come together into a few categories, such as financial problems, education of their children, and days after retirement. Ironically, I have never heard that people don’t worry about their lives until now. People always come along with worries all through the life. What’s worse is that people are apt to have negative idea about current situations. So my advice on this issue is followed as:
First, we need to take it easy on current situation and learn how to look on the bright side in any circumstance. Second, try to know what strength we have and work on improving our weaknesses. If we keep improving our strength and weakness at the same time, we can come up against any tribulation and hardship. Lastly, we need to learn how to enjoy overcoming difficulties per se. As the old saying goes, if you can’t avoid, enjoy it.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! Thank you for the very insightful pieces of advice you have shared. Worries are indeed inevitable in life and sometimes, all we can do is to learn to live through them.
-T. Sonny
Worries that people have come together into a few categories, such as financial problems, education of their children, and days after retirement. >>Correct!
Ironically, I have never heard that people don’t worry about their lives until now.
>>Correct!
People always come along with worries all through the life.
>>People always come along with worries all through life.
What’s worse is that people are apt to have negative idea about current situations.
>>What’s worse is that people are apt to have negative ideas about their current situations.
So my advice on this issue is followed as:
>>So some of my pieces of advice on this issue are as follows:
First, we need to take it easy on current situation and learn how to look on the bright side in any circumstance.
>>First, we need to take it easy on the current situation and learn how to look on the bright side of any circumstance.
Second, try to know what strength we have and work on improving our weaknesses.
>>Second, try to know what strengths we have and work on improving our weaknesses.
If we keep improving our strength and weakness at the same time, we can come up against any tribulation and hardship.
>>If we keep improving our strengths and weaknesses simultaneously, we can push through against any tribulation and hardship.
Lastly, we need to learn how to enjoy overcoming difficulties per se.
>>Ultimately, we need to embrace the experience of conquering obstacles.
As the old saying goes, if you can’t avoid, enjoy it.
>>As the saying goes, \"If you can\'t escape it, make the most of it.\"
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