What do you think motivates people to carry out hostages? What do you think they hope to achieve?
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This situation really catches other\'s attention but it is really scary.
Hostage taking incident is increasing nowadays.
There motives are different. I want to hear more of your ideas in class.
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Teacher Nina
There are many motives for hostage-taking.
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Motives can be identified as two ways broadly.
>> Did you mean: Motives can be identified in two broad ways.
One is acts which seek a specific concrete aim such as obtaining a ransom.
>> One acts which seeks a specific concrete aim such as obtaining a ransom.
Alternatively, another primary aim is to enable the perpetrator to seek revenge and/or to express some pent up frustration, anger or other emotion.
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Most recently, we have become familiar with politically inspired hostage-taking by terrorist organizations like IS to achieve some political end, such as the evacuation of Iraq by the Coalition Forces.
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Although it is a contentious issue, some would argue that even western countries have engaged in a form of hostage-taking masked by the euphemism of ‘rendition’ when they had invaded Arab countries.
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Anyway, they victimize innocent people for their own interest, which cannot be justified for any reasons.
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Generally, incidents which are not politically motivated tend to have a successful and safe resolution.
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We should never use others\' life for my own sake.
>> We should never use others\' life for our own sake.
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