What do you think motivates people to commit crimes?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think motivates people to commit crimes variaty reasons.
As a resentment,misunderstanding and distrust.
we should be able to hold back our anger when we are so mad.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! I agree. People’s feelings and emotions can strongly influence their actions, so controlling anger is very important. Thank you for doing your homework today! ^^
~T. Jewel
I think motivates people to commit crimes variaty reasons.
>>I think people are motivated to commit crimes for various reasons.
As a resentment,misunderstanding and distrust.
As a resentment,misunderstanding and distrust.
>>These can happen as a result of resentment, misunderstanding, and distrust.
we should be able to hold back our anger when we are so mad.
we should be able to hold back our anger when we are so mad.
>>We should be able to control our anger when we are very mad.
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