What do you think of a DINK family set up? (DINK - a partner in a well-off working couple with no ch
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I think people should respect a dink family’s choice. They choose to live together without a child. They’ve already considered diverse things with their spouses. After that, they decided not to have a child. Their decision is made by this careful process, so we can say it will right choice for them. In addition, there are many parents who are not good parents to their child. I think a dink family is better than those family. If people cannot take care of and protect their child, it would be the best choice not to birth a baby. Therefore, I respect dink family’s decision if they thought about the problem seriously and then decided.
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I think people should respect a dink family’s choice.
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They choose to live together without a child.
>>> correct
They’ve already considered diverse things with their spouses.
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After that, they decided not to have a child.
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Their decision is made by this careful process, so we can say it will right choice for them.
>>> Their decision is made by this careful process, so we can say it will be the right choice for them.
In addition, there are many parents who are not good parents to their child.
>>> correct
I think a dink family is better than those family.
>>> correct
If people cannot take care of and protect their child, it would be the best choice not to birth a baby.
>>> OR: If people cannot take care of and protect their child, it would be the best choice not to give birth to a baby at all.
Therefore, I respect dink family’s decision if they thought about the problem seriously and then decided.
>>> correct
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