What do you think of businesses that don’t provide health care insurance for their employees

2019-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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There are four responsibilities as living in Korean. These are education, paying taxes, serving military services and working. As part of the paying taxes, we have to join the national health insurance and pay for it\'s premium every month. That means that all citizens and companies must pay for the insurance expenses. We are able to go to the hospital anytime and just need to pay a small amount of money, because our national health insurance cover the medical expenses in most of cases. I can\'t expect living without national insurance. I have watched the movie about the health insurance system in USA. They have to pay quite large amount of money, even if they visit the hospital with cold. There are the controversial issues about the hospital which is running by personnel. If we want to run the hospital, it should be the nonprofit organization. However, our government would like to make hospital with profit organizations because they believe that the medical service would be improved

강사 첨삭

This is great, Sir [이름]!

Thank you for sending your opinion about the given topic. I hope our country would be able to provide a free healthcare to everyone. Have a wonderful day!

~Teacher Eunice


There are four responsibilities as living in Korean.

>>> There are four responsibilities living in Korea.

These are education, paying taxes, serving military services and working.

>>> These are education, paying taxes, serving in the military and working.

As part of the paying taxes, we have to join the national health insurance and pay for it\'s premium every month.

>>> As one of the tax payers, we have to join the national health insurance and pay for it\'s premium every month.

That means that all citizens and companies must pay for the insurance expenses.

>>> It means that all citizens and companies must pay for the insurance fee.

We are able to go to the hospital anytime and just need to pay a small amount of money, because our national health insurance cover the medical expenses in most of cases.

>>> We are able to go to the hospital anytime, we just need to pay a small amount of money because our national health insurance will cover the medical expenses in most of cases.  

I can\'t expect living without national insurance.

>>> I can\'t imagine living without our national insurance.  

I have watched the movie about the health insurance system in USA.

>>> I have watched the movie about the health insurance system in the USA.

They have to pay quite large amount of money, even if they visit the hospital with cold.

>>> They have to pay quite large amount of money, even if they visit the hospital with colds.

There are the controversial issues about the hospital which is running by personnel.

>>> There are controversial issues about the hospital which is running by private personnel.  

If we want to run the hospital, it should be the nonprofit organization.

>>> If we want to run the hospital, it should be a nonprofit organization.

>>> OR: The hospital must run by a nonprofit organization.

However, our government would like to make hospital with profit organizations because they believe that the medical service would be improved

>>>  However, our government would like to make hospitals as profit/private organizations because they believe that the medical service would be improved.

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