What do you think of cosmetic surgery?
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Nowadays, some cosmetic surgery is common things like double eyelid surgery, or nose..
Almost my friends and even I got a surgery.
I think it is a trend. Media are always shows beautiful super stars. And people are for long that people.
But everyone knows, too much cosmetic surgery are dangerous.
It might cause side effects and lose your real face and body.
On the one hand it a sad storise. People are attentive to a person gaze so they want to be a beautiful appearence.
Somedays all the people would know that \'Beauty is skin deep\'.
That days, the natural skin would be a trend so people loves their own apperance. I hope that world.
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You are beautiful inside and out. Check your spelling when making sentences and follow the correct patterns suggested. Ask questions more often to clarify and learn from the answers. ^^
You are beautiful inside and out. Check your spelling when making sentences and follow the correct patterns suggested. Ask questions more often to clarify and learn from the answers. ^^
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Nowadays, some cosmetic surgery is common things like double eyelid surgery, or nose..
>> Nowadays, some cosmetic surgeries are common like double eyelid surgery or nose lift surgery.
Almost my friends and even I got a surgery.
Almost my friends and even I got a surgery.
>> Almost all of my friends and I got the surgery.
I think it is a trend.
I think it is a trend.
>> Correct.
Media are always shows beautiful super stars.
>> Media always shows beautiful superstars.
And people are for long that people.
>> And people are longing to be like those people.
But everyone knows, too much cosmetic surgery are dangerous.
But everyone knows, too much cosmetic surgery are dangerous.
>> But everyone knows that too much cosmetic surgery is dangerous.
It might cause side effects and lose your real face and body.
It might cause side effects and lose your real face and body.
>> It might lead to terrible side effects and lose your real face and body.
On the one hand it a sad storise.
On the one hand it a sad storise.
>> On the other hand, it is a sad story,
People are attentive to a person gaze so they want to be a beautiful appearence.
>> People are attentive to a person\'s gaze so they want to be pretty with their appearance.
Somedays all the people would know that \'Beauty is skin deep\'.
Somedays all the people would know that \'Beauty is skin deep\'.
>> Someday, all people would know that \"Beauty is skin deep.\"
That days, the natural skin would be a trend so people loves their own apperance.
That days, the natural skin would be a trend so people loves their own apperance.
>> Those days, natural skin would be a trend so people love their own appearance.
I hope that world.
>> I hope to be in that kind of world.
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