What do you think of divorce?

Divorce is very terrible!!!!! Parent's fight is very scared! But divorce is more scare than fight! If my parents divorce, I only have one parents!! Mom or Dad!!! If I live with my dad, House will dirty! I wouldn't eat delicious food! If I live with my mom, We will poor! I wouldn't ride a car with my family! And I will go to other school!!! Most friends will condole to me! It's difficult to meet my brother!!! In my house, I will alone! Because, if I live with dad, he will go to company, So I will alone. and if I live with mom, she will find her job, So I will alone. And I wouldn't see my paternal grandmather or maternal grandmather! So I don't want that my parents are divorcing!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello there!

I enjoyed reading your composition.    Thank you for sharing a lot about your ideas on divorce.

I agree that having a divorce will lead to more problems so it is not good for parents to separate.

See you in class later.

-- Teacher Grace ^^ --- 

Divorce is very terrible!!!!!

>>Correct.

Parent\'s fight is very scared!

>>It is very scary when parents fight.
But divorce is more scare than fight!

>>But divorce is scarier than fights.

If my parents divorce, I only have one parents!!

>>If my parents will have a divorce, I will only have one parent.

Mom or Dad!!!

>>It will either be mom or dad.
If I live with my dad, House will dirty!

>>If I live with my dad, the house will be dirty!

I wouldn\'t eat delicious food!

>>Correct.
If I live with my mom, We will poor!

>>If I live with my mom, we will be poor.

I wouldn\'t ride a car with my family!

>>Correct.
And I will go to other school!!!

>>And I will go to another school.

Most friends will condole to me!

>>Most of my friends will condole me.
It\'s difficult to meet my brother!!!

>>Correct.

In my house, I will alone!

>>I will be alone in the house.

Because, if I live with dad, he will go to company, So I will alone.

>>If I live with my dad, he will go to the company so I will be alone.

and if I live with mom, she will find her job, So I will alone.

>>And if I live with my mom, she needs to find a job so I will be alone.

And I wouldn\'t see my paternal grandmather or maternal grandmather!

>>Correct. (Spelling check: grandmother) 

So I don\'t want that my parents are divorcing!!!!!!!!!!!

>>So I don\'t want my parents to have a divorce.