What do you think of frozen meals, microwave meals and other pre-packed meals?
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I try to avoid frozen meals, microwave meals and other instant foods. However, such meals are delicious and easy to cook so that they are hard to resist. The taste of those meals is sometimes better than home cooked meals. Although I do not have detailed information about what ingredients are included in those frozen meals and how bad they are to our health, my six sense tells that they will negatively affect our health. I suspect that MSG might have been added in the meals. I also think that using a microwave oven will be detrimental to our health regardless of whether it is used to cook homemade meals or to warm up frozen meals. The microwave cooking is not natural, nor healthy, and is far more dangerous to the human body than anyone could imagine. A microwave oven decays and changes the molecular structure of the food by the process of radiation.The minerals in vegetables are altered into cancerous free radicals when cooked in a microwave oven.
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Hello Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending this in.^^
Oh! I was not aware of that.^^ I thought that cooking using the microwave is good.
You gave a lot of information.^^ I hope that the people are aware like you.^^
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Teacher Nina
I try to avoid frozen meals, microwave meals and other instant foods.
>> Correct
>> Better: I try to avoid, frozen or microwave meals and other instant foods.
However, such meals are delicious and easy to cook so that they are hard to resist.
>> However, such meals are delicious and easy to cook so they are hard to resist.
The taste of those meals is sometimes better than home cooked meals.
>> Correct
Although I do not have detailed information about what ingredients are included in those frozen meals and how bad they are to our health, my six sense tells that they will negatively affect our health.
>> Although I do not have a detailed information about what ingredients are included in those frozen meals and how bad they are to our health, my six sense tells that they will negatively affect our health.
I suspect that MSG might have been added in the meals.
>> Correct
>> OR: I suspect that MSG might have been added to those meals.
I also think that using a microwave oven will be detrimental to our health regardless of whether it is used to cook homemade meals or to warm up frozen meals.
>> Correct
The microwave cooking is not natural, nor healthy, and is far more dangerous to the human body than anyone could imagine.
>> Cooking using the microwave is not natural, nor healthy, and is far more dangerous to the human body than anyone could imagine.
A microwave oven decays and changes the molecular structure of the food by the process of radiation.
>> Correct
The minerals in vegetables are altered into cancerous free radicals when cooked in a microwave oven.
>> Correct
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