What do you think of \"hand-me-down\" clothing? Will you wear one if somebody gives you one?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think hand-me-down clothing is fine. I don\'t need to buy clothes with money. When i was a young, i wore hand-me-down clothes. But i don\'t wear hand-me-down clothes now. Because i have a money, so i can buy my favorite clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Did you know that the world has a lot of textile trash? If people will be more caring about the environment, hand-me-down items are not of a big deal as long as it is clean, and wearable. Let\'s practice saving the environment so it would last longer :)
T. Aki~
I think hand-me-down clothing is fine.
I think hand-me-down clothing is fine.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t need to buy clothes with money.
>>> I don’t feel the need to spend money on clothes.
When i was a young, i wore hand-me-down clothes. But i don\'t wear hand-me-down clothes now.
>>> I don’t feel the need to spend money on clothes.
When i was a young, i wore hand-me-down clothes. But i don\'t wear hand-me-down clothes now.
>>> When I was younger, I wore hand-me-downs, but I don\'t wear them now.
Because i have a money, so i can buy my favorite clothes.
>>> Since I have money, I can buy clothes I really like.\"
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