What do you think of having tattoos? Please explain your side.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, I don\'t think that it is a good thing.
Because most people who have tattoos, are having tattoos because they want to be seen strong.
And I know that they want to be seen strong, so I don\'t think that he or she has good personality.
Because of this reason, I don\'t think that having tattoos in the body is not that good.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your opinion. See you later in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Because most people who have tattoos, are having tattoos because they want to be seen strong.
Because most people who have tattoos, are having tattoos because they want to be seen strong.
>>Because most people who have tattoos have them because they want to be seen as someone who is strong.
And I know that they want to be seen strong, so I don\'t think that he or she has good personality.
And I know that they want to be seen strong, so I don\'t think that he or she has good personality.
>>And I know that they want to be seen as strong, so I don\'t think that he or she has a good personality.
Because of this reason, I don\'t think that having tattoos in the body is not that good.
Because of this reason, I don\'t think that having tattoos in the body is not that good.
>>Because of this reason, I don\'t think that having tattoos on the body is that good.
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