What do you think of hunting? Would you eat an animal that you killed yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays, We don\'t usually hunt other creatures for surviving by ourselves.
Because of these reason, most people are not familiar with hunting by themselves.
So it will be very hard to hunt by ourselves in the nature.
And also we can feel some bad emotions while we are hunting because we need to kill the living creatures.
Because of these reasons, it is not a good thing to hunt for me.
And also if I need to hunt something for my surviving, then I will feed some bad feelings.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Me too! I would feel bad since I\'m a big animal lover. Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts about it. See you in our next class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
Nowadays, We don\'t usually hunt other creatures for surviving by ourselves.
>>Nowadays, We don\'t usually hunt other creatures to survive by ourselves.
Because of these reason, most people are not familiar with hunting by themselves.
Because of these reason, most people are not familiar with hunting by themselves.
>>Because of this reason, most people are not familiar with hunting by themselves.
So it will be very hard to hunt by ourselves in the nature.
So it will be very hard to hunt by ourselves in the nature.
>>So it will be very hard to hunt by ourselves in the wilderness.
And also we can feel some bad emotions while we are hunting because we need to kill the living creatures.
And also we can feel some bad emotions while we are hunting because we need to kill the living creatures.
>>And also we can feel some bad emotions while we are hunting because we need to kill living creatures.
Because of these reasons, it is not a good thing to hunt for me.
Because of these reasons, it is not a good thing to hunt for me.
>>CORRECT!
And also if I need to hunt something for my surviving, then I will feed some bad feelings.
And also if I need to hunt something for my surviving, then I will feed some bad feelings.
>>And also if I need to hunt something for my survival, then I will feel bad about it.
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