What do you think of international marriage?
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I think it\'s very good
We have different cultures language and religious but we\'re neighbors and we have to live together
Actually International marriage must have difficultes and mutual understanding
I think we should be responsible for each other.
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I think it\'s very good
>> I think international marriage is very good.
We have different cultures language and religious but we\'re neighbors and we have to live together
>> We have different cultures, language, and religions but we\'re still a neighboring countries. So, I guess it\'s ok if we live together.
Actually International marriage must have difficultes and mutual understanding
>> Actually, international marriage have some difficulties and it must have a wholesome understanding.
I think we should be responsible for each other.
>> I think we should be responsible in making such decisions.
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