What do you think of Korean men serving in the military?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Korean men serving in the military is very proud, because my grandfather and my father done well.
But I don\'t like some bad officers in the military.
Some peoples think the period is lost time, but I think it is very worthy.
강사 첨삭
Hello again, Jimmy!
Here\'s another edited essay. Please take a look at the revisions and alternative expressions used, such as I believe/I think, etc. Good night and catch you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What do you think of Korean men serving in the military?
I think Korean men serving in the military is very proud, because my grandfather and my father done well.
>> I think Korean men serving in the military are very proud because my grandfather and my father did well.
>> OR: I believe Korean men serving in the military is something to be proud of because my grandfather and my father did it.
But I don\'t like some bad officers in the military.
>> OR: But I hate some abusive military officers.
Some peoples think the period is lost time, but I think it is very worthy.
>> Some people think the period they spend in the military is lost time, but I think it is very worthwhile.
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