what do you think of languages thst are dying? Do you think they should be preserved?
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Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you once again for sending this in. Language is definitely a part of our culture, and it is our identity. If we lose it, we lose who we are. See you next class. Enjoy your weekend!
-T. Beth :)
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yes, I think that should be preserved.
>>> Yes, I think that they should be preserved.
Of course, the culture is always changing.
>>> CORRECT
So language is also born or die.
>>> So language keeps evolving.
we should accept new culture and new language.
>>> We should accept new culture and new language.
>>> OR: We should be open to new culture and new language.
But the language is a part of our heritages.
>>> But language is a part of our heritage.
keeping the heritages is very important because we can know our history and also plan our future through them.
>>> Keeping the heritage is very important because we can know our history and also plan our future through them.
>>> OR: Keeping our heritage is significant because we could know about our history and base our future plans from it.
So I think we should preserve it.
>>> CORRECT
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