what do you think of languages thst are dying? Do you think they should be preserved?

2018-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

yes, I think that should be preserved. Of course, the culture is always changing. So language is also born or die. we should accept new culture and new language.But the language is a part of our heritages. keeping the heritages is very important because we can know our history and also plan our future through them. So I think we should preserve it.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you once again for sending this in. Language is definitely a part of our culture, and it is our identity. If we lose it, we lose who we are. See you next class. Enjoy your weekend!

-T. Beth :)

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yes, I think that should be preserved.

>>> Yes, I think that they should be preserved.

Of course, the culture is always changing.

>>> CORRECT

So language is also born or die.

>>> So language keeps evolving.

we should accept new culture and new language.

>>> We should accept new culture and new language.

>>> OR: We should be open to new culture and new language.

But the language is a part of our heritages.

>>> But language is a part of our heritage.

keeping the heritages is very important because we can know our history and also plan our future through them.

>>> Keeping the heritage is very important because we can know our history and also plan our future through them.

>>> OR: Keeping our heritage is significant because we could know about our history and base our future plans from it.

So I think we should preserve it.

>>> CORRECT  

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