What do you think of Paralympic Games?
학생이 쓴 원문
All humans are equal.
If someone can\'t exercise or play the Olympics because of a disability, it\'s advisable to play the game in consideration of their disability.
It would be good for them to increase their competence and self-esteem through the Olympics.
강사 첨삭
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All humans are equal.
>> Correct
If someone can\'t exercise or play the Olympics because of a disability, it\'s advisable to play the game in consideration of their disability.
If someone can\'t exercise or play the Olympics because of a disability, it\'s advisable to play the game in consideration of their disability.
>> If someone can\'t exercise or participate in the Olympics because of a disability, it\'s advisable to play games in consideration of their disability.
It would be good for them to increase their competence and self-esteem through the Olympics.
It would be good for them to increase their competence and self-esteem through the Olympics.
>> Correct
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