What do you think of people who always work out, and how does this affect a person\'s mood?
학생이 쓴 원문
Few years ago, I almost worked out for two to three days of week.
I felt refresh and disappeared uncomfortable feelings that I recieved at work when I worked out.
I recommend working out.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your ideas about working out. It\'s great when you take time to share your ideas.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Few years ago, I almost worked out for two to three days of week.
>> A few years ago, I used to work out two to three days a week.
I felt refresh and disappeared uncomfortable feelings that I recieved at work when I worked out.
>> It made me feel refreshed and helped eliminate the uncomfortable feelings I experienced at work.
I recommend working out.
>> I highly recommend working out.
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