What do you think of people who cheat in their relationships? What do you think can be done to preve
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Terrific composition, Sir [이름]!
You started the week right. ^^
We learned a lot of values from our parents and in school.
As we go along with what life brings, we should maintain those good things.
There are a lot of temptations around us, we should not hurt others.
Thanks for your great insights again. Have a nice day.
Teacher Nina
We have learned at school that we should always be honest and maintain the highest ethical standards.
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>> Our teachers taught us in school that we should always be honest and maintain the highest ethical standards.
However, as we live in reality, we are often tempted by many things.
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>> However, in reality, we are often tempted by a lot of things.
We desire to earn lots of money, to get recognized by the public, to get respected and to be more attractive to the different sex.
>> We desire to earn lots of money, to be recognized by the public, be respected and be more attractive to the opposite sex.
We as a human all have good and evil inside of us.
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>> All humans have good and evil inside.
They are fighting with each other at every moment.
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Bottom line is, unlike humans, animals do not generally premeditate or do things outside of their natural order of things the way humans do.
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Humans are capable of knowledge, wisdom and incredible mistakes in judgment.
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Monogamy is the social norm because we are humans.
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Even if you are seeing someone before getting married, you are still responsible for keeping the relationship based on mutual trust.
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As we want to be treated with respect and love, we should treat others the same way.
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There is no one who is entitled to hurt someone, especially your loved one.
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Once you do, you will pay back.
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