What do you think of people who go on extreme diet just to look slimmer?
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In my opinion, going on extreme diet is dangerous and one shouldn\'t even try. I tried going on a diet and communicated with other dieters three years ago. I was impressed by other dieters and thought that I should eat less than a half than I had eaten before. It was not a very extreme diet but my eating habits and the way of thinking about food changed dramatically. I got a tendency to think too much on what I eat. Although I gained muscles, lost some fat and look healthier than before, I got problems with hormones and I sometimes have an impulse to overeat. Unless one is obese, one should think carefully of going on a diet.
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Hi Cindy,
Happy Monday! As always, awesome homework you\'ve got in here. The sentences are almost flawless:) You did great!
-Rachel
In my opinion, going on extreme diet is dangerous and one shouldn\'t even try.
>> correct
I tried going on a diet and communicated with other dieters three years ago.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
I was impressed by other dieters and thought that I should eat less than a half than I had eaten before.
>> I was impressed by other dieters and thought that I should eat less than of what I I had eaten before.
It was not a very extreme diet but my eating habits and the way of thinking about food changed dramatically.
>> correct
I got a tendency to think too much on what I eat.
>> correct
>> I tended to think too much about food or what to eat.
Although I gained muscles, lost some fat and look healthier than before, I got problems with hormones and I sometimes have an impulse to overeat.
>> correct (wonderful)
Unless one is obese, one should think carefully of going on a diet.
>> correct (awesome ending)
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