What do you think of people who say they don't want to be a parent? Are they being selfish or are th

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Maybe young couples are scared that they might have a hard time giving their kids a good life.

I think that\'s one of the reasons why more couples are happy without kids.

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I can understand the people who do not want kids.

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>> OR: I understand why some people don\'t want kids.

It was a social norm that people should get married and have babies.

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However, it is not an easy for all parents to raise and educate their kids these days due to higher education expenses and broader responsibilities than before.

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Indeed, parents’ roles have expanded from just feeding them to be a teacher, a friend, a mentor, and counselor for any problems they have.

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In early days, kids grew by themselves without being less cared by parents.

>> Did you mean: In early days, kids grew by themselves without being cared by parents.

>> OR: In the early days, kids grew by themselves without being cared by parents.

However, today’s kids need their parents’ help in every aspect of their lives.

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We can say they became more dependent on their parents.

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A lot of parents sacrifice their lives for their kids.

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Because of the increased burden, more young couples choose not to have babies.

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We cannot simply blame them to be selfish.

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They think that the burden they have to bear as parents far outweigh the joy and benefits they can have from raising kids.

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The low birth rate in Korea is becoming a serious issue because..

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