What do you think of people who stand outside stores or railway stations holding charity donation?

Good morning, [이름]nah!

How was your weekend? I hope you had a blessed one.

I can see that you are a good person and you give to charity.

T[이름]k you for answering the question.

-Teacher Shelly-

There is coming Christmas right of the corner.

>>> Christmas is coming just around the corner.

This time the year can see charity donation boxes here and there.

>>> This time of the year you can see donation boxes here and there.

Jesus was a born in Christmas that people helping If person needy.

>>> Jesus was born on Christmas day, people are helping those you are in need.
 Such as a great idea.

>>> That is a great idea.

 Especially the Salvation Army made red pot and wearing uniform and ringing the bell that collecting money.

>>> The Salvation Army especially made a red pot, wearing a uniform, and ringing the bell to collect money.

We have to help that money goes through needy person.

>>> We have to help so that the money will to the needy persons.
 If person is standing outside all day long that is not easy.

>>>If a person is standing outside all day long, it is not easy.

People does every year.

>>> People do that every year.
 Some people do never pay attention.

>>>So people never pay attention.

We have to open mind also have big heart that way in the world becoming better.

>>> We have to be open-minded and also have a big heart in that way the world will become better.

 When I was young I was a narrow mind also can’t see the other side but,

>>> When I was young I was a narrow-minded, I can\'t see the other\'s side.

I am getting older my mind open more I think became a better person.

>>> As I get older I become open-minded and a better person. 

one day my dream is my two son making some charity .

>>> One day, my dream is that my two sons will do some charity works.
 They will give back in society.

>>> They will give back to help the society.

My older son already donated some money his university.

>>> My older son already donated some money in the university where he graduated from.

Some people have lot a money but never do charity,but some people have little money that charity it.

>>> Some people have lots of money but they never do charity works, some people have little money that they give to charity.
 Life is short.we must do good work.

>>> Life is short, we must do good deeds.