What do you think of plastic surgery?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is good for people who worry about their appearance, but I don\'t like plastic surgery. Because change my face unless it is urgent, I don\'t need to do. And I think do plastic surgery is little bit scary.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daisy!
I agree with your answer. Plastic surgery is good for some people, but it is also scary at the same time. You should look for a good doctor if you want to have plastic surgery so that it will have a good result.
~Teacher Erin
I think it is good for people who worry about their appearance,
>>CORRECT
but I don\'t like plastic surgery.
>>CORRECT
Because change my face unless it is urgent,
>>Because it changes the way I look.
I don\'t need to do.
>>I don\'t need to do that.
And I think do plastic surgery is little bit scary.
>>I think plastic surgery is a little bit scary.
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