What do you think of rainforests?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think rainforests are very hot and humid.
But rainforests are beautiful and cool, because sunset is very nice.
I think rainforests is mysterious, so I want to go to the rainforests in the future.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s another edited essay, Jimmy! Please note how I removed the comma before the word \"because\". You don\'t need a comma in that sentence. Also, take note of how I [이름]nged the expression \"I think\" to \"I believe\". They are similar so you can use them inter[이름]ngeably. Have a good night there and see you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What do you think of rainforests?
I think rainforests are very hot and humid.
>> CORRECT~~
But rainforests are beautiful and cool, because sunset is very nice.
>> But rainforests are beautiful and cool because the sunset is very nice.
I think rainforests is mysterious, so I want to go to the rainforests in the future.
>> I believe rainforests are mysterious so I want to go to some of them in the future.
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