What do you think of reporting or newscasting as a job?
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I think reporting and newscasting as a job is good because if there are not newscasting and reporting, we can\'t know the news and can dissappear anchors\' job in the world. ヽ(・∀・)ノ
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What do you think of reporting or newscasting as a job?
I think reporting and newscasting as a job is good because if there are not newscasting and reporting, we can\'t know the news and can dissappear anchors\' job in the world.
>> I think reporting and newscasting as a job is good because if there is no newscasting and reporting, we can\'t know the news, and this type of job will disappear.
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