What do you think of the bus stations or bus stops in Korea?
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I think that Korean bus stations are good. Bus stations have machine that informs time bus arrives. Also, bus station blocks rain. So I think that Korean bus stations are good.
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I think that Korean bus stations are good.
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Bus stations have machine that informs time bus arrives.
>> Bus stations have machines or passenger information display system that gives information about the buses and the time they will arrive.
Also, bus station blocks rain. So I think that Korean bus stations are good.
>> Also, bus stations shelter us from the rain. So I think that Korean bus stations are excellent.
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