What do you think of the health service in your country?
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I have been thinking that the health service in my country is good rather than that other countries have.
>> I have been thinking that the health service in my country is better than the other countries.
The most of the various categories that includes a fee for consultation, inspection expenses and even cancers known well are covered by government through insurance.
>> Most of the various categories that includes a fee are; consultation, laboratory expenses and even cancer are all covered by the government through the insurance.
It makes the public to care their diseases in a proper time although the insurance is not full coverage.
>> It helps the citizen to deal with their health although it is not fully covered with the insurance.
Those who are disadvantaged can be provided to from subsidy to daily necessities such as food, clothing or something.
>>For the indigent they are provided with the basic necessities such as food, clothing or more.
Of course, I think that It is essential to expand the coverage of any diseases so that everybody can be taken to benefits of the health care service withouth any worries when diseases comes to your life.
>> Of course, I think that it is essential to expand the coverage to other diseases so that everybody can utilize the benefits of the health care services without any worries when one get sick.
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