What do you think of the idea of all education being online
학생이 쓴 원문
There are on-line educations in schools and companies now day.
In the past, The educations through on line are not popular in all area.
Therefore, peoples could not looking for it freely except some areas.
But these day, The education of online is highly stressed. specially after breaking of Corona119 this year.
And I am sure that it will be strongly activated in all range in-future.
and also peoples related in online will make an money easily than others.
Thanks my teacher.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jack!
You\'re always welcome and thank you as well for making your homework. ^^
I can relate with your answer since it\'s also the same here in my country.
Online education was not popular but due to the pandemic, people can only rely on it to continue studying.
Also, I want to share something.
For the word \'education\', in general, the plural form of it will also be \'education\'.
That is because we consider it non-countable based on its general concept.
That also goes with the word, \'food\'. It is also considered non-countable so the plural form will be the same.
For the word \'people\', this is already considered plural so you don\'t have to add -s. \'People\' is actually the plural form of \'person\'.
~Teacher Gina
>> There are online education in schools and companies nowadays.
In the past, The educations through on line are not popular in all area.
In the past, The educations through on line are not popular in all area.
>> In the past, the education through online was not popular in all areas.
>> Or: In the past, online education was not popular in all areas.
Therefore, peoples could not looking for it freely except some areas.
Therefore, peoples could not looking for it freely except some areas.
>> Therefore, people could not look for it freely except in some areas.
But these day, The education of online is highly stressed. specially after breaking of Corona119 this year.
But these day, The education of online is highly stressed. specially after breaking of Corona119 this year.
>> But these days, the online education is highly stressed especially after the COVID 19 broke out this year.
And I am sure that it will be strongly activated in all range in-future.
And I am sure that it will be strongly activated in all range in-future.
>> And I am sure that it will be strongly activated in all ranges in the future.
and also peoples related in online will make an money easily than others.
>> And also, people related online will make some money easily than others.
and also peoples related in online will make an money easily than others.
>> And also, people related online will make some money easily than others.
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