What do you think of the idea of education being online?

Sir [이름]!
Good evening! Thank you so much!

You are right. Ways of learning and teaching is really changing.

It changes for the better and more people benefit from it.

Actually, e-learning is more convenient for students and office workers.
It is because they can easily access their lessons or the things that they have to work on.

Not like before, we have to bring a lot of books everyday and we need to travel to go to school.

Technology is really a big help for us. We should be thankful to the people who invented the things that we use these days.

Talk to you soon. Enjoy the rest of the day.
Teacher Nina

There is no question that we live in an age of technology and the way of teaching or learning is changing.

>> There is no question that we live in the age of technology and the way of teaching or learning is changing.

>> OR: There is no question that we live in the era of advancing technology, wherein the way of teaching or learning is changing.

The traditional and conventional way of education was mostly via classroom or one on one mentoring.

>> Correct

However, as technology develops and advances, the new ways of education emerge.

>> Correct

Especially, young generation feel more comfortable using their laptops, smart phones or blogs to learn something. 

>> Correct

They do not have anything against using E-books.

>> Correct

E-learning or education online will become a key component in our future education system.

>> Correct

This is the trend and direction that our society is moving toward.
>> This is the trend and direction that our society is moving forward.

We do not have a choice.

>> Correct

>> OR: We don\'t have any choice.

We all need to incorporate technology into our education in order to keep up to date with the latest technology and improve our education system.

>> Did you mean: We all need to incorporate technology into our education in order to be updated with the latest technology and improve our education system. 

>> OR: We all need to incorporate technology into our education system in order to keep up to date with the latest technology and to improve it too.

The more and earlier that technology is embedded into education, the better.

>> Correct

Indeed, we discussed the same subject at the workshop that was held last week in Singapore and agreed that we need to more focus on e-learning.

>> Correct