What do you think of the idea of virtual pets, like Tamagotchi?

2014-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I do not agree on the idea of raising a virtual pet. As IT technologies advance, more sophisticated products or games that operate or simulate in the way that real animals do are rolled out in the market and draw attention especially from young people. Although I have not had an experience of raising a virtual pet like Tamagotchi, I think that it’s just another type of computer games. When we raise real animals like dogs, we feel, share, exchange emotions and commune with them. Advocates for virtual pets might insist that playing with them also contribute to creating sympathy between people and virtual pets, however, the level of communication and exchanging emotions are way different between raising a real pet and a virtual pet. How can you have the same feeling when you actually feed and touch your dog while you push the button on your artificial pet to follow the direction as the system is designed? I do not see any difference between normal computer games and virtual pets.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! Excellent thoughts Sir [이름]! Your ideas are really realistic. These gadgets or games are one of the problems parents face. Some kids save a lot of money in order to buy those products. Why do you think some parents are allowing their kids to take good care of virtual pets? I\'ve tried once and I was really interested in it that led me not to study hard when I was young. Hihihi! Thank you for sharing your opinions in writing. Talk to you in class. Teacher Nina   I do not agree on the idea of raising a virtual pet. >> Correct! As IT technologies advance, more sophisticated products or games that operate or simulate in the way that real animals do are rolled out in the market and draw attention especially from young people. >> Correct! >> OR: As technology advances, more sophisticated products or games that operate or simulate in the way that real animals do are sold out in the market. It draw attention from younger generation. Although I have not had an experience of raising a virtual pet like Tamagotchi, I think that it’s just another type of computer games. >> Correct! >> OR: Although I never tried raising a virtual pet such as Tamagotchi, I think it is just another type of game. When we raise real animals like dogs, we feel, share, exchange emotions and commune with them. >> Correct! Advocates for virtual pets might insist that playing with them also contribute to creating sympathy between people and virtual pets, however, the level of communication and exchanging emotions are way different between raising a real pet and a virtual pet. >> Correct! >> OR: Advocates for virtual pets might insist that playing with them also contribute to creating sympathy between people and virtual pets. However, the level of communication and exchanging emotions are way different between raising a real pet and a virtual pet. How can you have the same feeling when you actually feed and touch your dog while you push the button on your artificial pet to follow the direction as the system is designed? >> Correct! I do not see any difference between normal computer games and virtual pets. >> Correct!

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