What do you think of the Korean fashion style? Do you like it? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutely, I believe Korean has more refined fashion style than your country. :) Because there are 4 season so that I have a lot of options to put on the style, so I like it. But, seeing a different way, there are times when you\'re very conscious of people\'s eyes. Of course, I usually don\'t care about it, my friends tend to do. Sometimes, I don\'t like that.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Elic! You have enormous potential. I feel privileged to have met such a gifted student as you. Thank you for always doing your best.
Absolutely, I believe Korean has more refined fashion style than your country.
>>> Absolutely. I believe Koreans have a more refined fashion style than your country.
Because there are 4 season so that I have a lot of options to put on the style, so I like it.
>>> Because there are four seasons, I have a lot of options to put on the style, so I like it.
But, seeing a different way, there are times when you\'re very conscious of people\'s eyes.
>>> But, seeing things in a different way, there are times when you\'re very conscious of people\'s eyes.
Of course, I usually don\'t care about it, my friends tend to do.
>>> Of course, I usually don\'t care about it; my friends tend to do.
Sometimes, I don\'t like that.
>>> CORRECT.
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