What do you think of the leadership of your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Positive leader comes from open-minded.
Therefore, students should learn how to be a leader in seminar or symposium during their school day.
They have dreams to be a president, executive. director in the future when they grow.
We also have these kind of events for future leaders in our country.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jack!
Thank you so much for submitting your homework.
The corrections I made are actually minor ones.
So, I must say that you did a good job! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> A positive leader comes from being open-minded.
Therefore, students should learn how to be a leader in seminar or symposium during their school day.
Therefore, students should learn how to be a leader in seminar or symposium during their school day.
>> Therefore, students should learn how to be a leader in a seminar or a symposium during their school day.
They have dreams to be a president, executive director in the future when they grow.
They have dreams to be a president, executive director in the future when they grow.
>> They have dreams to be a president or executive director in the future when they grow up.
We also have these kind of events for future leaders in our country.
We also have these kind of events for future leaders in our country.
>> CORRECT.
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