What do you think of the month of March?
학생이 쓴 원문
\"March\" is one of my favorite months in the year for several reasons. First, March reminds me of the cherry blossoms. In Korea, we have cherry blossoms festival during the spring. The tree blooms the flowers mostly from late March to early April. This season is very beautiful and makes people happy. Secondly, March symbolizes a new beginning. For the schools, the semester starts in March. It makes students feel that the year has started and be prepared for the new beginning.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ye Ji! It must be good to enjoy the month of March in Korea. The Cherrt Blossom Festival sounds interesting. I hope that everything will be back to normal in Korea before this month ends. ~~T.Dee
\"March\" is one of my favorite months in the year for several reasons.
>>\"March\" is one of my favorite months in the year for several reasons.
First, March reminds me of the cherry blossoms.
>>CORRECT!
>>Firstly, March reminds me of the cherry blossoms.
In Korea, we have cherry blossoms festival during the spring.
>>CORRECT!
The tree blooms the flowers mostly from late March to early April.
>> The flowers mostly bloom from late March to early April.
This season is very beautiful and makes people happy.
>>CORRECT!
Secondly, March symbolizes a new beginning.
>>CORRECT!
For the schools, the semester starts in March.
>>CORRECT!
It makes students feel that the year has started and be prepared for the new beginning.
>>It makes students feel that the year has started and they should be prepared for the new beginning.
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