What do you think of the new trend of flavored coffee? What do you think happens when you overdose o

2014-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I don’t have any idea about the new trend of flavored coffee now because I do rarely drink coffee. The health effects of coffee are quite controversial. Depending on who you ask, it is either a super healthy beverage or incredibly harmful. Speaking of good things, it is high in antioxidants and linked to a reduced risk of many diseases. Coffee is more than just dark brown water. Many of the nutrients in the coffee beans do make it into the drink. Where coffee really shines is in its high content of antioxidants. The average person who eats a typical western diet actually gets more antioxidants from coffee than fruits and vegetable. However, it also contains caffeine, a stimulant that can cause problems in some people and disrupt sleep. People with cholesterol issues may have more problems if they drink some kinds of coffee. Coffee is a highly complex beverage with hundreds of compounds, which means it affects people differently. If you don’t already drink the stuff, don't start.

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T.G.I.F. Sir [이름]! I am so happy today! It is because even if you are busy and you will have a workshop today. You still did your essay and shared your opinions in writing. I appreciate it a lot. ^^ I hope that you\'ll have fun this weekend. I am excited to hear your stories next week. Hihihihi. Have fun and take care!Teacher Nina   I don’t have any idea about the new trend of flavored coffee now because I do rarely drink coffee. >> Correct>> OR: I don\'t have any idea abot the new trends of flavored coffee because I rarely drink coffee. The health effects of coffee are quite controversial. >> Correct >> OR: The effects of coffee in our health are quite controversial. Depending on who you ask, it is either a super healthy beverage or incredibly harmful. >> Correct >> OR: Depending on the person who you ask, it is either a healthy or harmful kind of beverage. Speaking of good things, it is high in antioxidants and linked to a reduced risk of many diseases. >> Did you mean: Speaking of good things, it is high in antioxidants and linked to reduce the risk of many diseases. >> OR: Speaking of the benefits, it is rich in antioxidants and linked to reduce the risk of having a lot of diseases. Coffee is more than just dark brown water. >> Correct Many of the nutrients in the coffee beans do make it into the drink. >> Correct Where coffee really shines is in its high content of antioxidants. >> Where coffee really shine is in its high content of antioxidants. The average person who eats a typical western diet actually gets more antioxidants from coffee than fruits and vegetable. >> Correct >> OR: The average person who eats a typical Western diet actually receives more antioxidants from coffee than fruits and vegetables. However, it also contains caffeine, a stimulant that can cause problems in some people and disrupt sleep. >> Correct People with cholesterol issues may have more problems if they drink some kinds of coffee. >> Correct >> OR: People with cholesterol issues may have more problems if they drink this kind of beverage. Coffee is a highly complex beverage with hundreds of compounds, which means it affects people differently. >> Correct If you don’t already drink the stuff, don\'t start. >> Did you mean: If you don\'t drink that stuff, don\'t start. >> OR: If you don\'t drink this kind of beverage, don\'t start.

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