What do you think of the rainy season? How do you feel when it rains.
학생이 쓴 원문
I hate the rainy season, because I don\'t like the feeling of wet and sticky.
And it\'s uncomfortable to bring my umbrela.
But I love to hear raindrops inside.
강사 첨삭
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What do you think of the rainy season? How do you feel when it rains?
I hate the rainy season, because I don\'t like the feeling of wet and sticky.
>> I hate the rainy season because I don\'t like the feeling of getting wet and sticky.
>> OR: I hate the rainy season because I don\'t like getting wet and sweaty.
And it\'s uncomfortable to bring my umbrela.
>> And it\'s uncomfortable to bring my umbrella.
>> OR: Also, it\'s bothersome to bring an umbrella when I go out.
But I love to hear raindrops inside.
>> But I love to hear the sound of raindrops or the rain inside.
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