What do you think of the sound and smell of rain?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like rainy days.
When it rained, I used to enjoy drinking a cup of coffee and listening to music looking outside.
In these days, listening to the sound of rain make me feel comfortable.
It seems to me relaxed emotionally .
강사 첨삭
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I like rainy days.
>> Correct
When it rained, I used to enjoy drinking a cup of coffee and listening to music looking outside.
When it rained, I used to enjoy drinking a cup of coffee and listening to music looking outside.
>> Before, when it rained, I used to enjoy drinking a cup of coffee and listening to music while looking outside.
In these days, listening to the sound of rain make me feel comfortable.
In these days, listening to the sound of rain make me feel comfortable.
>> These days, I listen to the sound of the rain and it makes me feel comfortable.
It seems to me relaxed emotionally .
It seems to me relaxed emotionally .
>> It seems that I am emotionally relaxed.
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