What do you think of tour group packages?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday [이름]!
Making a reservation to a travel and tour company could actually give you a second thought. So instead, why not try to do your own search for the best deals you could possibly have. I wish I could travel in different countries like you. Thank you for your great attitude in class, you were great!
Ciao!
See you^^
~T. Eunice
In my opinion, it has the pros and cons.
>> In my opinion, it has pros and cons.
the first good thing is that you don’t need to prepare traveling plans.
>> The first advantage is that you don’t need to prepare your traveling plans.
Or
>> The first advantage is that you don’t need to prepare your itinerary.
If you pay for it, they will do everything what you need.
>> If you pay for it, they will arrange everything for you.
And Tourists see around with together, you don’t need to be in danger.
>> You can see a lot of tourists along the way so you don\'t need to worry.
Although it is convenient, I prefer to planning for trip by myself.
>> Although it is convenient on our part as a traveler, I prefer to plan my trip by myself.
For me, travelling would start since planning from searching flight tickets to find entertainment.
>> For me, traveling would start on planning and searching your flight tickets to find better deals.
In this process, I can find very local information that group tour packages can never contain.
>> In this process, I can find cheap and better deals that tour packages don\'t offer.
So, if you have a plan to go to trip, Instead of calling to a tour group package company, open the computer and do googling.
>> So, if you have plans to go on a trip, instead of making a reservation to a travel and tour company, open your computer and start searching Google for the best deals for your trip.
It will be let you know everything you want.
>> It will provide you everything you want to know.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.