What do you think of toy guns as toys for children? Are they good or bad toys for children? Explain.
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I think played toy guns with children is good because toy guns is fun but toy guns are dangerous.
I like toy guns
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Here\'s your revised homework, Yale. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided, such as \"I like\", \"I love\" or \"I enjoy\". See you soon!
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Jean~~
What do you think of toy guns as toys for children? Are they good or bad toys for children? Explain.
I think played toy guns with children is good because toy guns is fun but toy guns are dangerous.
>> I think children love to play with toy guns because they are fun but I also think toy guns are dangerous.
I like toy guns.
>> OR: I enjoy playing with toy guns.
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