What do you think of transplanting an animal heart into a human?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that it is so revolutionary technologies.
Sometimes we face the emergency situation.
For example, some patient comes to the hospital who has heart or blood of having get diseased.
So, many doctors or experts search for another person\'s heart or blood for alternative purpose. But It doesn\'t have all that things.
When that situation, if you have an animal\'s heart or blood, you have the second method of solution to an emergency situation.
Surely we will feel sorry to animals, but Human has more smarter than animals and we have high technologies.
I think that we have to use it and more advance. Even so nobody human in the world, we live in a world where the strong prey upon the weak.
Thanks
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강사 첨삭
Good morning, Shawn!
How have you been? Why where you absent last Friday and yesterday?
Hope to see you later ^^.
-Teacher Shelly-
>>> Correct!
Sometimes we face the emergency situation.
Sometimes we face the emergency situation.
>>> Correct!
For example, some patient comes to the hospital who has heart or blood of having get diseased.
For example, some patient comes to the hospital who has heart or blood of having get diseased.
>>>For example,a patient comes to the hospital who has a heart or blood disease.
So, many doctors or experts search for another person\'s heart or blood for alternative purpose.
So, many doctors or experts search for another person\'s heart or blood for alternative purpose.
>>> Correct!
But It doesn\'t have all that things.
>>> It doesn\'t have all the things it needs.
When that situation, if you have an animal\'s heart or blood, you have the second method of solution to an emergency situation.
When that situation, if you have an animal\'s heart or blood, you have the second method of solution to an emergency situation.
>>> When that happens, if you have an animal\'s heart or blood, you have an alternative solution.
Surely we will feel sorry to animals, but Human has more smarter than animals and we have high technologies.
Surely we will feel sorry to animals, but Human has more smarter than animals and we have high technologies.
>>>Surely we will feel sorry to animals, but human are smarter than animals and we have high technologies
I think that we have to use it and more advance.
>>>I think that we have to use it and be more advance.
Even so nobody human in the world, we live in a world where the strong prey upon the weak.
>>>We live in a world where the strong prey survives compared to the weak.
Thanks
Shawn
>>>We live in a world where the strong prey survives compared to the weak.
Thanks
Shawn
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