What do you think of wellness institutions and their programs? How often do you eat junk food?

2014-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Aren’t wellness institutions and their programs aiming to promote public health and wellbeing? If yes, there is not much room for us to debate their objectives although we can argue over detailed actions plans, effectiveness of the plans, benefit vs. cost, etc. Many high schools in the US are driving a campaign to encourage teenagers not to eat fast food like hamburgers, french fries, etc. They are making a rule to ban vending machines that sell coke on campus. Some schools have stopped giving chocolate milk as school lunch to their students. No one can challenge or raise a doubt on their rationale because it’s crystal clear that the institutions are doing the right thing. I rarely eat fast food. Actually I love pizza, hamburgers, spaghettis, etc., however, I refrain myself from eating them because they are not good for my health. My daughter is also crazy about junk food and we often have a hard time to pursuade her to eat proper meals.

강사 첨삭

A magnificent day to you Sir [이름]!

Wow! Really? You rarely eat fast food?

Oh my god! That\'s my weakness, every weekend I should eat in a fast food chain, Hihihi!

It\'s great that you are really conscious with what you eat.

I think sodas shouldn\'t be available in school canteens.

I admire you for being a great father to your child.

Have a great day! Talk to you very soon.

Teacher Nina

 

Aren’t wellness institutions and their programs aiming to promote public health and wellbeing?

>> Correct! ( well being)

If yes, there is not much room for us to debate their objectives although we can argue over detailed actions plans, effectiveness of the plans, benefit vs. cost, etc.

>> Correct!

Many high schools in the US are driving a campaign to encourage teenagers not to eat fast food like hamburgers, french fries, etc.

>> Correct!

They are making a rule to ban vending machines that sell coke on campus.

>> They are making a rule to ban vending machines that sell coke in campuses.

>> OR: They are making a rule to ban vending machine that sell sodas inside the campus.

Some schools have stopped giving chocolate milk as school lunch to their students.

>> Correct!

No one can challenge or raise a doubt on their rationale because it’s crystal clear that the institutions are doing the right thing.

>> Correct!

I rarely eat fast food.

>> Correct!

Actually I love pizza, hamburgers, spaghettis, etc., however, I refrain myself from eating them because they are not good for my health.

>> Correct!

>> OR: Actually I love pizza, hamburgers, spaghetti, etc. However, I refrain myself from eating them because they are not good for my health.

My daughter is also crazy about junk food and we often have a hard time to pursuade her to eat proper meals.

>> Correct!

>> OR: My daughter is also crazy about junk food and we often have a hard time to persuade her to eat healthy foods.

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