What do you think of when you listen to music?
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As I said, I like to listen a music which has a touching lyrics. Whenever I hear that, my feeling turn to be emotionally. Sometimes I feel get a console from a music or charge with a cheerful energy. And also sometimes I do not think at all while listing the music. I want my brain take a rest seems like escaping from a real world. The time I can hear the music is only my time when nobody interrupt me. So I think I like more my music time :)
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You are right, [이름]! It\'s one of the best feelings when you have carefree moments. Thank you for sharing!-Faith-
As I said, I like to listen a music which has a touching lyrics. >> As I said, I like to listen to music which has touching lyrics.
Whenever I hear that, my feeling turn to be emotionally.
>> Whenever I hear that, I become emotional.
Sometimes I feel get a console from a music or charge with a cheerful energy.
>> Sometimes, I feel consoled by music or recharged with a cheerful energy.
And also sometimes I do not think at all while listing the music.
>> Also, sometimes I do not think anything at all while listening to music.
I want my brain take a rest seems like escaping from a real world.
>> I want my brain to take a rest because it seems like escaping from the real world.
The time I can hear the music is only my time when nobody interrupt me.
>> During the time I listen to music is my only time when nobody interrupts me.
So I think I like more my music time :)
>> So I think I like my music time more :).
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