What do you think of your country’s politicians?

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The korea is democratic country and there are two major parties, former is progressive party that is ruling party, the latter is conservative party.
>>> Korea is a democratic country and there are two major parties here, the current administration is progressive when ruling the country, while the latter is a conservative party.  

I am the one who support a ruling party because I think conservative party is corrupted.

>>> I am the one who supports the ruling party because I think the conservative party is corrupt.

I thought everything was ok if politicians made us live very well.
>>> It would have been fine if the politicians made us live well. 

So, I gave my choice ex-president Lee who was running famous and powerful company, Hyundai.

>>> So, I had voted for the ex-president Lee who was running a famous and powerful company, Hyundai.

But it didn\'t need much time to realize it is right choice.
 >>> But, it didn\'t need much time to realize that it wasn\'t the right choice.

He made a ghost company and kept government\'s money in his pocket for the time after the retirement. 

>>> He made a ghost company and kept the government\'s money in his pocket for the time after his retirement.

His nickname is bulldozer because he carry out anything if he would like to apply without any discussion.

>>> He was called \"bulldozer\" because he could carryout anything when applying something for his business without further discussions.

People in our country and I realized that we needed to change our leader and give a interest to the politicians.

>>> People in our country and I realized that we needed to change our leader and be interested in politics.

The rate of vote was extremely low when we had a election, especially students and young people are not interested in politics.

>>> The rate of votes were extremely low when we had the election, especially students and young people were not interested in politics.

We should remember that the flower of democracy is the election.

>>> Correct!