What do you think of your daughter-in-law?
학생이 쓴 원문
l have a daughter-in-law. I will have second daughter-in-low on April. Long time ago I want to have daughter, because daughter is pretty and cute. The daughter do understand mam. My dream is go shopping with my daughter. But daughter different with daughter-in-low. The daughter-in-low is not daughter. Daughter-in-low is only my son\'s wife. So I only expect my son and his wife live happily. Luckily it seems like our sons met good wife.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]!
I understand your put. I think it is the feeling of most moms who do not have daughters only sons. It is the same feeling of fathers who do not have sons but only daughters. My uncle has 5 daughters, he said having a daughter is good but they are all like their mom. hahaha!
Talk to you later.
Aki~
l have a daughter-in-law.
>> CORRECT!
I will have second daughter-in-low on April.
>>I will have a second daughter-in-law in April.
Long time ago I want to have daughter, because daughter is pretty and cute.
>> A long time ago I wanted to have a daughter because a daughter is pretty and cute.
The daughter do understand mam. My dream is go shopping with my daughter.
>> Daughters understand moms. My dream is to go shopping with my daughter.
But daughter different with daughter-in-low.
>> But a daughter is different from a daughter-in-law.
The daughter-in-low is not daughter.
>> The daughter-in-law is not a daughter.
Daughter-in-low is only my son\'s wife.
>> A daughter-in-law is only my son\'s wife.
So I only expect my son and his wife live happily.
>> So I only expect my son and his wife to live happily.
Luckily it seems like our sons met good wife.
>> Luckily it seems like our sons met a good wife.
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