What do you think parents worry about when their kids start dating?
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Well, I agree with that if I have my own daughter to worry about her. But, for my son, it\'s okay to start dating. It could look as a discrimination. You know, women would take an disadvantage whether they want to do or not unlike men. So, both of couple should take care about each other. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, I agree with that if I have my own daughter to worry about her.
>> CORRECT!But, for my son, it\'s okay to start dating.
>> CORRECT!It could look as a discrimination.
>> CORRECT!You know, women would take an disadvantage whether they want to do or not unlike men.
>> You know, women would take a disadvantage whether they want to do or not, unlike men.
So, both of couple should take care about each other. :)
So, both of couple should take care about each other. :)
>> So, both of the couple should take care of each other. :)
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