What do you think people in hot countries think of snow the first time they see it?

What a wonderful and perfect experience to see snow, Sir [이름].

I was imagining while reading your essay. Hihihihi.

It will be really great to touch and feel the snow.

But unfortunately, we don\'t have winter in the Philippines.
I hope that someday, I will be able to go to Korea and enjoy it.

Thanks for a marvelous composition.

Teacher Nina

It would be wonderful and amazing experience for the people from tropical countries to see snowing and a lot of snow piled on roofs of houses, mountains, and hills. 

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>> OR: It would be a wonderful and amazing experience for the people from tropical countries to see snowing and a lot of snow piled on roofs of houses, mountains, and hills. 

Everything will be covered in white flakes.

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The color of the world seems to be different.

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It seems a lot brighter than usual.

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>> OR: It seems a lot brighter than usual.

It could be as cheesy as it sounds and it looks quite magical seeing the little flakes floating down from the sky.

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When it snows, it will be cold outside, but you can get out of your house and walk on the snow.

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Every step you take feels like you are crunching the snow below your boots.

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Seeing snow on TV is quite different from what you actually see, touch, and feel in the field.

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It is an unavoidable excitement that comes out once you get to see and touch snow.

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It will be quite special to you. 

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Even you can enjoy seeing snowing in your house.

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You can open the curtain and stand by the fire wall drinking a hot cup of coffee and watching how quietly and beautifully it falls down outside of the window.

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