What do you think risk taking is? Have you ever took a risk?

2016-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Generally speaking people admit that there is no return without risk. Many people give a challenge to take a exam to be a high government officer in Korea. It usually takes from 3 to 5 years to prepare the exam and one of 1,000 people passes the exam so that the exam is very high risk. I tried to take the exam when I was 27 years old. After I was 30 years old, it is very difficult for me to apply for other job because most CEO would like to hire younger man than me. Therefore for me to challenge the exam is the thing which has much risk. I much worried that if I failed the exam, what could I do for my life? At the first year I failed all the exam. At that time my friend recommended me to give up the exam. But I decided to continuing my studies. Next year I passed the primary exam but I also failed the final exam. It was a last year for me to apply for other jobs. If failed the exam next year, I had a difficulty in find a job to live with. Finally I passed all the exam at third year.

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Hello [이름]!   I\'m proud of the way you worked today. The type 3 conditional is used to refer to a time that is in the past, and a situation that is contrary to reality. The facts they are based on are the opposite of what is expressed. The type 3 conditional is used to refer to an unreal past condition and its probable past result. In type 3 conditional sentences, the if clause uses the past perfect, and the main clause uses the perfect conditional. example: If I had failed the exam in my last year, I would have a difficulty in finding a job.   Teacher Venus^^   Generally speaking people admit that there is no return without risk. >>>CORRECT   Many people give a challenge to take a exam to be a high government officer in Korea. >>>Many people give a challenge to take an exam to be a high government officer in Korea.   It usually takes from 3 to 5 years to prepare the exam and one of 1,000 people passes the exam so that the exam is very high risk. >>>It usually takes from 3 to 5 years to prepare for the exam and one of 1,000 people passes the exam so the exam has very high risk.   I tried to take the exam when I was 27 years old. >>>CORRECT   After I was 30 years old, it is very difficult for me to apply for other job because most CEO would like to hire younger man than me. >>>When I was in my thirties, it was very difficult for me to apply for other jobs because most CEO\'s would like to hire younger men.   Therefore for me to challenge the exam is the thing which has much risk. >>>Therefore for me to take the exam is the thing which has much risk.   I much worried that if I failed the exam, what could I do for my life? >>>I was worried that if I failed the exam, I could do anything for my life.   At the first year I failed all the exam. >>>In the first year, I failed all the exams.   At that time my friend recommended me to give up the exam. >>>At that time my friend recommended that I give up taking the exam.   But I decided to continuing my studies. >>>But I decided to continue my studies.   Next year I passed the primary exam but I also failed the final exam. >>>In the next year, I passed the primary exam but I also failed the final exam.   It was a last year for me to apply for other jobs. >>>It was my last chance to apply for other jobs.   If failed the exam next year, I had a difficulty in find a job to live with. >>>If I had failed the exam in my last year, I would have a difficulty in finding a job.   Finally I passed all the exam at third year. >>>Finally I passed all the exams in my third year.

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