What do you think should be changed if your community?
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I think people have to change their thoughts that they can safely drive when they are drunken.
That\'s so danger behavior. That thoughts would make someone killed.
But lots of people in our community still drive their car in drunken, although they do know it\'s illegal.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I think people have to change their thoughts that they can safely drive when they are drunken.
>>I think people have to change their thoughts, so that they can safely drive whenever they are drunk.
That\'s so danger behavior.
>> That\'s a dangerous behavior.
That thoughts would make someone killed.
>>CORRECT
But lots of people in our community still drive their car in drunken, although they do know it\'s illegal.
>> But lots of people in our community still drive their car even if they are drunk, although they do know it\'s illegal.
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