What do you think should be done to improve living condition in cities?
학생이 쓴 원문
In personally, I have to keep my mind to positive and looking for good things in the city to living.
Government have to help the people\'s city life.
Government have to fix the house prices going up and block the speculation in real estate.
Speculation makes the expensive house prices.
Normal people\'s annual income is about 20000~30000 dollar but normal apartment\'s price is about 400000~1000000 dollar in Seoul.
It is really weird.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Simon! Thank you for telling me another information. I appreciate that you are giving me great examples that are happening in your city. Until the next one! :)
Government have to help the people\'s city life.
Government have to fix the house prices going up and block the speculation in real estate.
>>The government has to fix the increasing price of houses and block the interests of real estates.
Speculation makes the expensive house prices.
>>The interest makes the house expensive.
Normal people\'s annual income is about 20000~30000 dollar but normal apartment\'s price is about 400000~1000000 dollar in Seoul.
>>CORRECT
It is really weird.
Please go over sentence 3 and 4. What do you mean speculation? Are you referring to the interests that real estate owners add to the price of houses?
~Teacher Sheila
In personally, I have to keep my mind to positive and looking for good things in the city to living.
>>Personally, I have to keep thinking positively and look for good things in living in the city.
OR>>Personally. I have to think positive continuously and look for the good things it can give in living in the city.
Government have to help the people\'s city life.
OR>>The government has to help the life of the people in the city.
OR>>The government has to give support the life of the people in the city.
Government have to fix the house prices going up and block the speculation in real estate.
>>The government has to fix the increasing price of houses and block the interests of real estates.
Speculation makes the expensive house prices.
>>The interest makes the house expensive.
OR>>The interest makes real estates expensive.
Normal people\'s annual income is about 20000~30000 dollar but normal apartment\'s price is about 400000~1000000 dollar in Seoul.
>>CORRECT
It is really weird.
>>CORRECT
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